My first childhood room was painted blue. The room wasn't very big but it had a very childish aroma. I am sure if i ever go back to that room i will have so many memories of my childhood. The room was mostly a mess, but it was always comfortable for me. This room had two windows and a very good view of the lake.

Narrative pre writing

The last time i cried watching TV was when i watched Lion king when i was little. This movie really makes it easy for their viewers to relate to the story. This was one of the key components that made the movie what it is today.

Second Draft (Decriminalizing marijuana)

Marijuana is known to be the most common illegal drug in the world. More than 100 million Americans have tried Marijuana and 25 million have smoked it in the past year. This fact alone gives you an idea of how common this illegal drug is and its influence on society. Marijuana is a mixture of dried leaves, stems, seed, and flowers of the hemp plant called Cannabis Sativa. There are many nicknames for this drug such as weed, pot, and bud. Marijuana was first outlawed in the United States in 1905 in El Paso, Texas. The reason behind this was strictly motivated by racial prejudice against Mexican immigrants. These laws had nothing to do with the actual effects of the marijuana. Cannabis, in the form of hemp was a common plant in the states before this law enacted and was even used for medicine, clothing, and other goods. Although there are no proven health related effects from THC, the psychoactive substance present in marijuana, I can understand the government’s worries about decriminalizing this drug. The drug is perceived to make users very lazy and indolent, although it completely varies from person to person. Another theory is that decriminalizing it will likely lead more people to try marijuana, especially the curious and the young people. Another assumption the government has engraved onto the public is that there are no medicinal advantages to using Marijuana. There are many other reasons why the government is so uptight about decriminalizing this drug, but the only way to truly resolve this problem is by exchanging common beliefs and ideas.

The public’s feelings about marijuana are slowly changing. For years, the public has only known marijuana for its negative properties. With the proposal of many new laws, the public is slowly starting to understand the truth about marijuana. With that being said, I do understand where the anti-marijuana advocates are coming from. Although there are many health experts that say marijuana is harmless to the human body, there are many things we do not know about this plant. Is marijuana addicting and does it have long lasting effects in the brain? These are important questions that must be answered in order to fully decriminalize this drug. There is also the theory of how decriminalizing the drug will not solve our drug control problems. Since distribution will still be illegal, the drug wars between dealers will not mitigate. Although this might be true, decriminalizing the drug will save the government huge amounts of money now being spent on the enforcement of such laws.

I believe that marijuana should be decriminalized because it has more advantages than disadvantages. One reason is that it will save the government so much money and time now being spent on the enforcement of such marijuana laws. “On a national level, a recent report by Jon Gettman estimated that national criminal justice expenditures for enforcing marijuana laws is $7.6 billion per year with $3.7 billion being allocated to police, $853 million to the courts, and $3.1 billion to corrections.” (Austin). If possession of this plant was not a criminal offense, the amount of work and money being put into enforcement and processing tasks will drastically reduce, saving the government tons of money. Many anti-marijuana advocates believe that decriminalization will result in greater use of the drug. One out of ten US residents use marijuana at least once a year and 47% of all adults have tried marijuana at least once (Duncan). If almost half the country has tried this illegal drug, greater use of this drug should be the least of concerns. Although there are no proven facts that decriminalizing it will reduce the use of this drug, there are also no proven facts that it will result in greater use of the drug.

There is also this theory about how decriminalizing this drug will result in higher crime rates. I can see where the anti-marijuana advocates are coming from on this but this can also work both ways. It is a well known fact that most criminals have tried an illegal drug. Their logic for the drug use will cause crime argument is that since there are so many criminals that have tried illegal drugs; they believe that the crimes they committed were due to those illegal drugs. Their argument is like saying water must be the reason for their crimes because all criminals have consumed water in their lifetime. Marijuana should not be related to any kind of committed crimes because it is neither a gateway drug nor one that necessarily propels one to criminal activity. The number of marijuana related arrests has grown significantly in the past decade. “In 1970 there was an estimated 188,682 arrests for the drug – by 2003 the number had increased to 755,000” (De La Mater). Although, it is clear that marijuana arrests have risen in the 30 years, vast majority of these arrests are for possession. These kinds of arrests are just a waste of time and money. Many prisons are slowly letting inmates get out early because prisons are becoming too crowded. Decriminalizing marijuana will drastically reduce all of this, which will save the government billions of dollars.

It is quite evident that decriminalizing marijuana will have an overall positive impact on the country. Decriminalization is the first step to the government making billions of dollars, which they could be using for other productive things. I believe now is the best time for decriminalization of marijuana because of the recession this country is already facing. There are also no proven health effects from marijuana, which only makes decriminalization make more sense. Doctors are already giving out medical marijuana cards to help patients with different kinds of diseases. It is time to open our eyes and realize the benefits of decriminalizing marijuana.

Austin, James. "Rethinking the Consequences of Decriminalizing Marijuana." NORML.org. 2 Nov. 2005. Web. 18 Mar. 2010.

De La Mater, Benning. "US MA: Use of Marijuana a Hot Topic, With Ballot Question Possible." Media Awareness Project. Jan. 2008. Web. 18 Mar. 2010. .

Duncan, Cynthia. "The Need for Change: An Economic Analysis of Marijuana Policy." Wilson Web. Wilson Web, 2009. Web. 18 Mar. 2010. .

Reflection 2.2

There were a lot of changes in my second draft after all the feedbacks from my first draft. One thing I changed was my empathetic writing towards my opposition’s side. In my second draft, I had more things in common and I really understood where the opposing side was coming from. I also did a lot more research, which helped me make my essay better with stronger evidence. One thing I need to work on my final draft are the paragraph transitions. I need to find better introductory sentences to my paragraphs which helps with the flow of the paper.

Reflection (2.1)

I found this rogerian argument fairly difficult just because i had to be very empathetic when writing this paper. I didn't really know when to be empathetic and when to argue my point. This also took me a fairly long time to write just because it took me a long time to research this topic. I learned a lot from writing this paper because it really made me understand the other side of the story. It was pretty hard trying to gain common ground with the opposing side, but that’s why I believe this paper made me learn a lot about writing. On my second draft, I am definitely going to make sure I have some common ground with the other side because I am pretty sure I wasn’t as empathetic as I needed to be. I also think that this paper wasn’t as long as it needed to be. So I need to research more and support my thesis with evidence. Overall, I believe this paper has the potential to be good, it just needs some work.

First draft (Decriminalizing Marijuana)

Marijuana is known to be the most common illegal drug in the world. More than 100 million Americans have tried Marijuana and 25 million have smoked it in the past year. This fact alone gives you an idea of how much marijuana has influenced society. Marijuana is a mixture of dried leaves, stems, seed, and flowers of the hemp plant called Cannabis Sativa. There are many nicknames for the drug such as weed, pot, and bud. Marijuana was first outlawed in the United States in 1905 in El Paso, Texas. The reason behind this was strictly motivated by racial prejudice against Mexican immigrants. These laws had nothing to do with the actual effects of the marijuana. Cannabis, in the form of hemp was a common plant in the states before this law enacted and was even used for medicine, clothing, and other goods. Although there are no proven health related effects from THC, the psychoactive substance present in marijuana, I can understand the government’s worries about decriminalizing this drug. The drug is perceived to make users very lazy and indolent, although it completely depends on the user. Another theory is that decriminalizing it will likely lead more people to try marijuana, especially the curious and the young people. Another assumption the government has engraved onto the public is that there are no medicinal advantages to using Marijuana. There are many other reasons why the government is so uptight about decriminalizing this drug, but the only way to truly resolve this problem is by exchanging common beliefs and ideas.

The public’s feelings about marijuana are slowly changing. For years, the public has only known marijuana for its negative properties. With the proposal of many new laws, the public is slowly starting to understand the truth about marijuana. With that being said, I do understand where the anti-marijuana advocates are coming from. Although there are many health experts that say marijuana is harmless to the human body, there are many things we do not know about this plant. Is marijuana addicting and has long lasting effects in the brain? These are questions that must be answered in order to fully legalize this drug. There is also the theory of how decriminalizing the drug will not solve our drug control problems. Since distribution will still be illegal, the drug wars between dealers will not mitigate. Although this might be true, decriminalizing the drug will save the government huge amounts of money now being spent on the enforcement of such laws.

I believe that marijuana should be decriminalized because it has more advantages than disadvantages. One reason is that it will save the government so much money and time now being spent on the enforcement of such marijuana laws. “On a national level, a recent report by Jon Gettman estimated that national criminal justice expenditures for enforcing marijuana laws is $7.6 billion per year with $3.7 billion being allocated to police, $853 million to the courts, and $3.1 billion to corrections.” (Austin). If possession of this plant was not a criminal offense, the amount of work and money being put into enforcement and processing tasks will drastically reduce, saving the government tons of money. Many anti-marijuana advocates believe that decriminalization will result in greater use of the drug. One out of ten US residents use marijuana at least once a year and 47% of all adults have tried marijuana at least once (Duncan). If almost half the country has tried this illegal drug, greater use of this drug should be the least of concerns. Although there are no proven facts that decriminalizing it will reduce the use of this drug, there are also no proven facts that it will result in greater use of the drug.

There is also this theory about how decriminalizing this drug will result in higher crime rates. I can see where the anti-marijuana advocates are coming from on this but this can also work both ways. It is a well known fact that most criminals have tried an illegal drug. Their logic for the drug use will cause crime argument is that since there are so many criminals that have tried illegal drugs; they believe that the crimes they committed were due to those illegal drugs. Their argument is like saying water must be the reason for their crimes because all criminals have consumed water in their lifetime. Marijuana should not be related to any kind of committed crimes because it is neither a gateway drug nor one that necessarily propels one to criminal activity. The number of marijuana related arrests has grown significantly in the past decade. “In 1970 there was an estimated 188,682 arrests for the drug – by 2003 the number had increased to 755,000” (De La Mater). Although, it is clear that marijuana arrests have risen in the 30 years, vast majority of these arrests are for possession. These kinds of arrests are just a waste of time and money. Many prisons are slowly letting inmates get out early because prisons are becoming too crowded. Decriminalizing marijuana will drastically reduce all of this, which will save the government billions of dollars.

It is quite evident that decriminalizing marijuana will have an overall positive impact on the country. Decriminalization is the first step to the government making billions of dollars, which they could be using for other productive things. I believe now is the best time for decriminalization of marijuana because of the recession this country is already facing. There are also no proven health effects from marijuana, which only makes decriminalization make more sense. Doctors are already giving out medical marijuana cards to help patients with different kinds of diseases. It is time to open our eyes and realize the benefits of decriminalizing marijuana.

Austin, James. "Rethinking the Consequences of Decriminalizing Marijuana." NORML.org. 2 Nov. 2005. Web. 18 Mar. 2010.

De La Mater, Benning. "US MA: Use of Marijuana a Hot Topic, With Ballot Question Possible." Media Awareness Project. Jan. 2008. Web. 18 Mar. 2010. .

Duncan, Cynthia. "The Need for Change: An Economic Analysis of Marijuana Policy." Wilson Web. Wilson Web, 2009. Web. 18 Mar. 2010. .

Pre writing

My paper is going to focus around the controversial topic of decriminalizing marijuana. Many people are opposed to this because of their lack of information on marijuana. They go about believing the public’s perception of the drug, which should not be even counted as an opinion. I can understand some problems this proposal might cause but there are definitely more advantages than disadvantages when it comes to decriminalizing marijuana.