Reflection 1.1

The comments that my group members provided me helped me a lot. The feedbacks made me realize all of the flaws in my essay. The most apparent flaw in my essay was the thesis statement in order to let the reader know what I will be addressing. I also need to do a better job of incorporating sources in my essay. A works cited page at the end of the essay will really help out my essay. For my next draft, I will also be doing a better job of using quotations to back up my points. The feedbacks from my group also helped me realize that my transitions from paragraphs were clear. I need to do a better job of that to help my essay flow better. My process has been just trying to do more research on the subject and trying to get more facts to back up my ideas. The main thing I want to accomplish in my next draft is to satisfy all of the feedbacks that my group members left me. I will also be adding a works cited page to help the readers fully understand my usage of sources. Overall, the feedbacks were a great help to me, which will definitely make my essay better.